the story.-Comics

Hi! So I’m not the best drawing but if you could take a moment to read this short story and tell me if I should continue or not. I would like to publish as a book! If you do read and have any advise or ideas I would love to read it in the comments! thank you so much for taking your time to read this! I may draw out this story if I work on my drawing skill. (I’m working on it.)